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My Ideal: First Page




About My Ideal


Logline: A lost writer goes to a dating agency to find purpose and inspiration

Type: Short Screenplay

Pages: 16

Genre: Dark Romantic Comedy


 

First Page


OVER BLACK


We hear the incessant CLICK-CLACK of an old TYPEWRITER. Each

stroke a hammer shot to your temple.


FADE IN


INT. CRAP APARTMENT - DIMLY-LIT BEDROOM - DAY


CLOSE UP on the back of a bashed-up 50s typewriter - we

can't see who's using it. There's a fireplace crackling

off-screen.


We slowly swing around the desk. This reveals a VINTAGE TAPE

RECORDER playing those typewriter types, and ARLO ROKEN (30)

slumped over, head on folded arms, facing us. EMPTY WHISKEY

GLASS on shelf above him.


INT. CRAP APARTMENT - HALL WAY (OUTSIDE BEDROOM) - DAY


Chipped wooden door.


TAPE RECORDER CLICK. Typewriter sounds STOP.


Someone inside THROWS ON A JACKET, then LIGHTS UP a

cigarette.


Arlo opens the door, cigarette hanging out his mouth, and

walks off-screen.


EXT. STREET - DAY


We follow Arlo from the front, as he walks down a narrow

street, smoking. He's scanning each door's number.


He stops in his tracks, ruffles through his pockets, and

checks a piece of paper. Satisfied, he puts it back and

walks to the door.


EXT. NUMBER 56 - DOOR - DAY


A dramatic old door - like those you find in an old Italian

town. Metal numbers '56' hammered on, clumsily.


There're two knockers - one black and one blue - and an

unlabelled intercom.


Arlo appears. After a brief moment of confusion, he goes for

the blue knocker.


KNOCK KNOCK.


The door unlatches.


INT. SMITH, JOHNSON & SMITH DATING AGENCY - WAITING ROOM -

DAY


Arlo's sitting in a drab, and stuffy waiting room. Squeaky

chairs, with cheap, laminate-like frames. A magazine rack

offers ancient tabloids, golf magazines and a Playboy.




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